Stunninp poetry my friend.You inspire me too.

Thanks Karla, I'm glad. Bless you.

This poem is very well put together, im very impressed with how you can summon words that a lot of people whose first language was English didn't even know. *Claps*

This piece is very sad to me, i get that vibe at least, its almost icy the way i feel from it.

You excel at describing and getting feelings out, you excel at capturing people, although i have not read much of your work i would love to see a story where events are constantly coming in and out and your character in the poem shows more then a single emotion. I think if you could implement that into a poem, set it up so that you get that experience you will benift in all your poems. I think it would be a challenge for you...

But thats just me

This poem is perfect the way it is and the way you write poetry is unique, so dont change anything just because i said something.

Thank you for sharing~!

I think I'll give a try at the points you've stated. I know it'll be a challenge, but it's worth it. That's poetry all about, trying different methods to portray emotions. Thanks for suggesting, I appreciate... Cheers!

Thanks for this lovely comment, I'm really grateful. Bless you..