I Am.

by Blissful   Feb 22, 2012


I am
a broken dreamer
tangled within a
cocoon

gingerly waiting
for a feverous
touch
to kiss

awake

every wish
whispered
to a fermenting
star
has carved doubt
in my lips
and shaded gloom
among honey eyes

I am
but a
solitaire
awaiting my
advocate

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Lovely imagery .........sweet write

  • 12 years ago

    by AppleChaz

    Excellent 5/5.. simply short, simple and beautiful..

  • 12 years ago

    by Scrittore

    I really love the overall flow of the poem, you words: "frementing star, gingerly waiting" are very original! Nicely done. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I loved the reference to being a "broken dreamer". You painted such a lovely picture with your words. Word choice was amazing as always. Exceptional piece of writing you have penned.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I am
    but a
    solitaire
    awaiting my
    advocate

    Thats a definiton that could be applied to so many people. We are always forever for our advocates: somebody who will defend us regardless of our mistakes. In the end we are broken dreamers expecting that somebody could mend our pieces or give us a different shape. Great work.I really liked it.

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