Nicely done, seamless and that is a good thing. The blood countess, a female serial killer and never convicted, but banished from society. Borne into a weathly family, makes you wonder what happened to cause her to be this way.

Seems this is about a serial killer in reality ages ago. I love how you described her persona; a ruthless lady with a thirst for extreme blood from the innocent. You use deep, dark and suicidal words to portray how her wrath burns and rips lives apart. A very powerful piece written with such eloquence as usual of you. Blessings to you. Cheers!

My King

what a wonderful piece. I loved it.

Awesome, Awesome poem.

Filled with lots of dark images. It flows so well and the rhyming is awesome. Not forced.

Such a good poem!!! Loved it

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What a beautifully darkened poem,,, it's really bloody tempting :)

This was absolutely awesome, its like a cradle of filth song. great job

Magnificent and amazing,,,a brilliant write with great everything I love love loved it 5/5

Hi TJ¨
What a horror story covered in poems, love it not the content, that is a bit to bloody

five

I haven't really been on the site properly for a really long time and this was the first poem I've read since coming back and wow!! Thank you for still writing the most amazing masterpieces, your talent has just kept on getting better.

You know, you're so talented and gifted. Very few people can write in so many different genre's and still be absolutely amazing no matter what it is.

Reading your poems is a gift to everyone:) hope you're doing well TJ:) (I still have the same issue with the site ... They STILL only have a voting scale of up to 5 which seriously is an insult to your incredible talent.)

Well done for yet another AMAZING poem:)