by Sunshine
Austin, you were wrong, you should have told me, I painted a sad portray rather than you write a sad poem. |
by Sylvia
Austin, time has a strange way of shaping the emotions we have regarding love and life in general. Sometimes the outlook is not positive and we feel that the future looks bleak for love and life. As with all things, the passage of time does improve love and life, we just have to be open to that improvement and not let the past hold us back. Well done again to you. |
by Meena Krish
First off, I like the title of this poem as it surely is an eye catcher! |
Beautifully written, loved the title & just loved these lines, immense depth: |
by Kuro
Well worded my friend. it flowed so well, as if reading a play. |