Wow this piece is intense... especially in the eyes of a "little" person. But at least it is extremely well written and was enjoyed immensely by this so called "little" one. There is a lot of emotion conveyed here and wow is it powerful. The word choice was captivating, and the style was fantastic... granted fantastic isnt such a great word, but hopefully you get my point. Anyway excellent job to the both of you!

5/5 for sure

MRK