Top ten music poem

by Ole Carsten   Feb 23, 2012


We are young in loves motions
Love is now planted deep inside you.
Love that deep have I ever felt,
My heart is on fire, my eyes in tears.
My love feels good for me.
I am thrilled you are in my life
Scream our love loudly.
I know you will have me from now.
It is like we have known each other for life.
Emotions is erupting from deep in our souls

made this for fun, based on top ten tunes Apples list this week

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Karla

    obrigado por seus belos pensamentos por trás de seus comentários

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Wonderful piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Lioness

    I am blushing, the idea was just to see if it was possible, due to a discussion in the kite runner club about music and what you liked
    For me that looked like a top ten list

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I think it is wonderful when a poet can make a poem about anything! Nicely done

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi both

    just to have some fun, not the best of ideas

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