One-sided love...

by Amreen   Feb 23, 2012


Who says one-sided love is wasted....?
having many beautiful aspects to unfold
many graceful experiences to gain,
And the flavours of happiness to be tasted...

It begins with the mild sweetness of first few meetings,
the cherishing moments of the first conversations
progressing to enter into an aura of likingness,
then developing the sweet exchange of occasional greetings...

You aren't aware about your beloved's feelings,
but,you know your heart is beating for them
you know you feel glee in their ambience,
And this feeling turns your every worst moment,to be kept healing....

Their single "hi" is enough to make your day,
their single smile is enough to make happiness infectious
their thoughts in your mind;
throughout the day,
keeps a glistening smile on your face,
And the world seems to be kissed by the winds of mirth,to stay....

How majestic and elegant is this feeling of one-sided love!
which can be felt every second
which feels the presence of your beloved,everytime,everywhere,
who has a beauty like the innocent dove...

Life indeed must encounter
such an expression of exuberance,
which resides in the corner of your heart;
filled with fervour and exult...

Our memories should be etched with this yet untold feeling,
the feeling for your love
no matter what your love feels for you,
to be cherished life long as a sweet rememberance....

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    This is so sweet and romantic. I loved how you described the feeling of love from the 1st meeting to how it'll gradually blossom. You know, you've said it all rightly, from the deep recess mind of an experienced. *winks*. You don't have to be fully inlove and been dating for a while to realise how much your partner means to you. Love is an unfathomable emotion that can't be described. A little stare, in each others presence, walking in silence together or just stalking each others thoughts in silence. Those build up your feelings and spark off your love for one another. Hence, it'll gradually be shrouded with affection from both of you. Love a beautiful experience is very much worthwhile if with the right person. Lets cherish moments shared and be each others strength. Its a two way ride. A good and inspiring read. I believe all lovers can relate to this and shoulde be read and enjoyed all!

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    I agree with some of the other comments, There is a great message in here and truly a great poem, but it is clouded by too many words used, you could cut some down to help the flow.
    also every stanza apart from 1 is 4 lines, you have 1 5 which interupts the pace somewhat.
    Your emotion and passion in is this is very clear, you cannot fault this at all.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Let not the Start, overwhelm you. Every Beginning, shades a truth.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    This is such a wonderful poem, you have penned it so well. I really like how you explain how a one sided love can be beneficial because many people don't see things that way. The rhyming was well written and had such nice detail on the emotions. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I really salute for your positive kind of person..hmmm..by the way, I was curious about the title and I know it is a common issue..but the thing I like the message here is the positive side for having a one sided love...I like your poem. Great work:))

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