Deana,
This write is absolutely timeless in the expression of capturing anguish and hurt.
The flow was impeccable, though in my heart I can't say it was on purpose. This had to come from deep within as only pure writes that convey the emotions as well as this one are not staged for flow or checked to see if they adhere to what others call poetry.

One of your very best writes in my opinion.
Excellent.

Hello Deana

As Kay says, this is an excellent piece with lovely flow and natural rhyme which I love to see in a any poetry.

All the best,
Ben

Excellent.