What a brilliant write!!!!!!!. Well the poem had an echo of sadness to it I couldn't help but smile as the whole poem fitted together so well and I really enjoyed reading it.

All the stanza's in this poem are really good so it is hard to pick a favorite but if I had to I would choose the following

"Yet I've found
nothing can be reversed,
and the stream of oxygen
is slowly dissipating
from what it should be....
watch me fight for a
pure breath."

5/5