by Karla
I loved the haiku and picture. |
Very interesting Haiku indeed. |
by Lonely Rider
Indeed how beautiful it looks but how devastating are the effects. |
by Ms Happiness
What a cute haiku I love it:) |
by Maple Tree
Liz- I admire the haiku form... you captured the clouds beauty..just before It explodes like confetti and rains rush In like wicked stallions.... :-) |
Lovely, what a beautiful description before turning into a natural disaster. Bless you. |
by Britt
AH. This is such a wonderful and creative image, I didn't pay much attention the title and read the poem thinking it was fog or some sort of storm (hello, storm clouds lol), but the white cotton candy and the hurricane clouds/rain/disaster... wow. Wonderful imagery. You did awesome with so little words! |
Great image i admire anyone who tries formed poetry as tge rules you have to stick to well donex |
Awww Liz this is a beautiful haiku! I love how the message is clear in this poem, in such a short structure. In a few words, you made an impact. I love the inspiration, and thank you for providing the photo... it really does look like white cotton candy! LoL I love cotton candy :) |
I am fascinated with clouds, the storm clouds that are dark and deceivingly beautiful |
by Decayed
Indeed, looks are deceiving (in the imagine), I adore how you transformed that into an amazing haiku. |
This is a lovely haiku that in my opinion is faultless. I loved what you have done witht he picture |
by Ronel McCarthy
Lovely haiku :) |