by Ronel McCarthy
Awesome palindrome ! Well done |
by Hellon
Most people who attempt this form (and I will include myself among them) go for short lines and simple words...you have done neither here....this is enchanting! |
by Sylvia
Very nice Raj and as Hellon said, you didn't take the easy way with this form. The meaning or images of the poem change when the words are reversed and both "little" poems could stand alone. Well done. |
It is rare to find a properly formed palindrome that succeeds not only in making sense, in the literal meaning, but also portrays a cogent scene. In your case you have done both quite well, the imagery is distinct and the night scene you captured is enjoyable. |
This is quiet a sophisticated form of poetry. Very brilliant use of words for such a complex form. |
This was excellent but also reminds me of home, |
by Decayed
Okay, LR that is one hot poem. I've read such forms before but couldn't understand anything. But this.. it's just crafty and alive. I like how you brought this image of coyotes rupturing the silence of the midnight with their howling. |
I've never heard of a Palindrome before but I think you did an excellent job at attempting this type of poetry as it requires a lot of thought or time. So well done for having ago at this type of poetry. |
by Meena Krish
I can only smile as I read this poem. A beautiful nature poem where animals and mother earth come together. Liked the images you painted with words! Well done with the form Raj! |
by Sunshine
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by Jad
I really liked the fact that you tired this form and not just that, but you even went all out and went for longer lines and bigger words. Your poem flowed really well and it read well forwards and backwards. Your imagery is quite enchanting and gives me a good idea of what I am seeing as I read. |
Palindrome - Ultaa Pultaa 'NITIN'..lol |