The Curse(Tanka)

by Yakori bint Muhammed   Feb 24, 2012


24th February, 2012.

The sparkling sabre
reflects through the imperial
sea, baring my face
to wipe golden tears of wrath,
soaking dry shore of my sins.

(c) Y-MAG

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  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks for your comment, I appreciate loads.. Bless you :-)..

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You have a way with words..I will have to reread this a few times more to really grasp at what you were trying to convey...

    'golden tears fo wrath', I really like how you worded that.

    Well done, excellent poetic language

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks LP, I'm grateful.. :-), God bless you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Yakori, I like this a lot, the colors..the sounds.. the whole set.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Thanks loads Nei, for the comments. I'm still learning so I'm sure the more I read and write, thus, perfecting the craft. I'm grateful. :) ..

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