Whoa... what a beautiful etheree! I usually don't care much for this form as people make it so choppy and restricted feeling, but you did wonders with it. It had incredible flow and just the saddest, softest tone. Beautifully written!

A really powerful Etheree Liz,
The motion you but into this was amazing, it was powerfully sad yet smooth and soft, and really beautiful.

Hugs
xxx

Wow this poem is awsome:)
Etheree, that was great how u managed to nake this poem meaningful, and heartfelt using this form:)

Read this poem in the form contest and loved it.
I think that this form emphasizes your words even more and it really touched my heart.

Beautiful etheree Liz. Simply lovely.

Perfectly written in an amazing form. It's reality when you love someone and you lose them.
excellent

This is such a sweet, smooth and sad etheree. I love how it flowed freely, taking a shape of its own. A profound piece. So intense and real, fear of loosing is a great loss but can't be escaped. It all glooms to a dull end but so beautifully.

Amazing great piece dear, take care, BRAVO! :-)..

Liz, this is amazingly melancholic.
Flawless!

Oh this is simply beautiful. The poem contains such sorrow. You speak of such a sad moment yet you managed to organise the emotional content of the poem so that the reader could connect with the piece. You put everything in right sport so that no line was out of place. Short but well put.

Excellent!

5/5