Comments : Found the reason..

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Cuuuuuute beyond belief!!

    I really like this write, very sweet and honest, i have noticed many of your writes make me smile almost immediately :-))

    Again a great job:-)

    My only criticism would be to break it into one long stanza or two, it might just be me but i think it might read a little better if it wasnt in a paragraph shape....but only a suggestion cause we all write how we write :-)

    • 12 years ago

      by Wafaa

      Thank you:) i will fix the issue u pointed out and i reallyy appreciate it :))