Bleeding rose (Triolet)

Wow not sure what to say on this one cuz it's so greatly written lovely and romantic,,amazing I loved it,,fantastic job and it has so much feeling and so much meaning,,,closest love feeling poem u've written I think 5/5 <3

Wow... beautiful... I love this poem very much and you wrote a lovely triolet. Your imagery and word choice were magnificent, and made me imagine a room filled with flowers and love would be blossoming... it would be so serene and lovely.

This would be a hit poem on a Valentine's Day/ anniversary card - you would make so much from it! Hehe <3

I just want to ask did you mean to write "and" between the words purity and love? Just checking :)

This poem is beautiful, nothing more can express how much I enjoyed it. Nominating it <3

I like this form and I must say that you did well with it too.

Simple white rose laced in red
romantic mix of purity an love

^I can imagine this lovely white rose with a pretty lace of red..a lovely combination. The combination of purity (white) and love (red) gives an elegant and royal look for the rose..lovely!

speaking words that can't be said

^Flowers does make a woman smile and it speaks to her in ways not even words can match!

touch her heart let feelings spread

^While reading this line I could picture the rose unfolding its petals...blooming. Just like a smile on a woman's face when she sees this lovely rose..liked this line!

attached on wings of a mourning dove

^And to see such a lovely rose associated with a mourning dove, just breaks the heart. I found this line touching. Overall, a lovely triolet and an excellent read :)

First off I loved your title. I think you picked a good one as it drew me into the poem and made me feel curious.

As for the poem itself I loved the read. I was touched by this piece and even though it wasn't a long poem I felt it said alot.

5/5

TJ-

The elegance of this piece Is so pretty..... this piece dances... beautiful arrangement of poetic aroma!! love this poem~