That's no way to say goodbye

by broken sword   Feb 25, 2012


I loved you in the morning, our kisses deep and warm,
your hair upon the pillow like a sleepy golden storm,
yes, many loved before us, I know that we are not new,
in city and in forest they smiled like me and you,
but now it's come to distancesand both of us must try,
your eyes are soft with sorrow,
Hey, that's no way to say goodbye.
I'm not looking for another as I wander in my time,
walk me to the corner, our steps will always rhyme
you know my love goes with you as your love stays with me,
it's just the way it changes, like the shoreline and the sea,
but let's not talk of love or chains and things we can't
untie,
your eyes are soft with sorrow,
Hey, that's no way to say goodbye...

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  • 12 years ago

    by broken sword

    Thank u isa :(

  • 12 years ago

    by Isabella

    Nice poem, I love how you can paint an image in reading this poem it's nicely writen keep it up :)rhymeing poems are the best i think i love how rhymeing could put allot together like this poem here great job

  • 12 years ago

    by broken sword

    Oh s0rry f0r that type of w0rd. . I just use it f0r full attenti0n of pers0n...n thank you f0r ur c0ment. . :)

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    I like the rhymes, really. Like the wording and everything. Especially the image about her sleeping upon a pillow like a golden storm, it's such a subtle metaphor to say she is a blondie! I like how you kept this simple as it is, and how it wasn't stressted that much, y'know, the rhymes and so. But it felt not really poetic when you said 'hey' it's like something I'd use more in my slang not in poetry. Anyway, just my opinion! I enjoyed the read. ;)

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