I like the rhymes, really. Like the wording and everything. Especially the image about her sleeping upon a pillow like a golden storm, it's such a subtle metaphor to say she is a blondie! I like how you kept this simple as it is, and how it wasn't stressted that much, y'know, the rhymes and so. But it felt not really poetic when you said 'hey' it's like something I'd use more in my slang not in poetry. Anyway, just my opinion! I enjoyed the read. ;)

Oh s0rry f0r that type of w0rd. . I just use it f0r full attenti0n of pers0n...n thank you f0r ur c0ment. . :)

Nice poem, I love how you can paint an image in reading this poem it's nicely writen keep it up :)rhymeing poems are the best i think i love how rhymeing could put allot together like this poem here great job

Thank u isa :(