Comments : Goodbye. I hate you

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    An emotion that so many of us have felt and lived through. I thought you did well in writing just how it is, the roller coaster of I need you I hate you.
    Confused pain that in time heals
    Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Sometimes there is nothing to do but to hate the one who broke our hearts.It is a sad moment.

  • 12 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Great poem, yes it does hurt losing the one we love to another person, but in a sense it frees us from the pain of having a half hearted individual playing upon the strings of our hearts. Excellent poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Roronoa Zoro

    Great poem I know it hurts to lose that special someone keep writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I feel as though this poem is your way of having some closure, the venting is great.

    I think it is awesome but of course heartbreaking that someone has done this to you.

    x great poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Glenn G

    Very powerful and emotional. I think you have perfectly captured the pain so many of us have suffered because of the selfish deeds of another.