An emotion that so many of us have felt and lived through. I thought you did well in writing just how it is, the roller coaster of I need you I hate you. |
by Karla
Sometimes there is nothing to do but to hate the one who broke our hearts.It is a sad moment. |
by Autuumnbree
Great poem, yes it does hurt losing the one we love to another person, but in a sense it frees us from the pain of having a half hearted individual playing upon the strings of our hearts. Excellent poem |
by Roronoa Zoro
Great poem I know it hurts to lose that special someone keep writing |
by Lioness
I feel as though this poem is your way of having some closure, the venting is great. |
by Glenn G
Very powerful and emotional. I think you have perfectly captured the pain so many of us have suffered because of the selfish deeds of another. |