by Jenna Bella Oldridge Feb 26, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Knife to the skin |
by Amreen
Badly intense. Raw and deep. Wow on the image you show here. Gave me a chill for the way you want to move on. |
Knife to the skin |
by Wicked Ways
I love dark poems, I love these types of poems, I'm glad I decided to take a look at your poetry.... the title drew me in of-course, bleed. knife to skin, I like that opening and I agree with everlasting you have a nice flow and nice rhymes - makes this dark poem an even more enjoyable read :) |
by HOLLY ARMER
Such raw emotion! I really like your choice of short lines...it added tk the intensity portrayed by your words. |
by L
I really enjoy the flow and the rhymes |