This poem made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. I think you wrote about a difficult topic yet you managed to write something honest and profound.

5/5

Wow...thats all i can think of to say

This is absolutely horrible to think about this illness and realize the real facts about the voices in a person's mind. You personalize this, strip it down, and make it clear for the reader the tortue that this person is going through and trying to endure. Incredible play on emotions, truly heartbreaking to all those affected.

Keep writing
MaryAnne

I know how this feels.. When you're already going through things they don't understand, and still, some people make fun of you..

I have a now mild SPD, so I can relate..

Beautiful and haunting piece 5/5

-X

I know a person who deals with this disease...a few actually. They've both gotten really depressed and suicidal before, but somehow they always pull through. it takes a lot to live with it, because its uncontrollable. this is a great poem!