Comments : Poetry an I

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    A very well worded poem, mired in your love for poetry. Powerful imagery, mixed with raging emotions, very well portrayed here. The similie to compare the flow of poetry from our deep thoughts, like "debris or matter" gushing from a volcano was well done. The intoxicated feelings that one gets when writing poetic thoughts, is indeed earthrattling, or "vibrates" = shakes our insides, is so well captured in the 2nd stanza.
    The interrogative in the 3rd stanza was very unique, and the words below about how your poetry reflects you, your very breath, self and essence, are simply beautiful.

    Poetry my very breath
    my true self
    my essence
    my being
    poetry...
    hold me
    forever

    Well expressed, from the poet in you. Enjoyed your style and depth. 5/5 and nominated.

  • 12 years ago

    by CuteThingsGoneWrong

    I feel this poem more then others probably understand because i have a love hate relationship with poetry. It is something i can never turn away from but at the same time it suffocates me.. It holds me close, always loves, and is always there. That in general is my relationship with poetry. Im very captured by the writing style because even though its freeverse, its still unique and interesting. It truly does describe what it is to be a poet from the heart. Thank you for sharing this piece

  • 12 years ago

    by *emmax*

    JustNei,love-you analysis of the poem makes me realise how deep it is,more than I was aware!now that in essence reveal that you are a poet in truth,hehehe!much love,thank you

  • 12 years ago

    by *emmax*

    JustNei,love-you analysis of the poem makes me realise how deep it is,more than I was aware!now that in essence reveal that you are a poet in truth,hehehe!much love,thank you