by Ronel McCarthy
Beautiful imagery to paint an evening in Ireland .'Oozing from her aura '......love reference to aura ! You constructed excellent rhyme .......well done bro ! :) |
Loved the imagery, so vividly described. Great rhymes as well. |
I understand the cresoted fence should be creosoted, i.e. made from treated lumber. I agree that specled should be speckled. Also, PnQ rules prohibit ALL CAPS in the title. It should be Initial Caps only. |
by Lonely Rider
I loved how you have described in detail... beautiful imagery and wonderfully worded. |
This was more like a painting then a poem. It was smooth, full of images like the stroke of an artist brush. Excellent |
by Ingrid
This was really beautiful and descriptive, I can see you gave much thought to presenting things as they truly are. Much eye for detail. |