by Lioness Feb 27, 2012
category :
Life, society /
other
Your fraudulent lips |
by Lonely Rider
The ending is what makes the poem so beautiful ... it hits you hard ... like a bitter realization ... very strong and powerful poem. |
by Chelsey
So often in life we make mistakes, do things we regret, and our refelction turns ugly and we don't realize who we've become....this poem expresses that very well. |
by Maple Tree
Ohh Liz, I'm speechless... I wish I could give you a huge in depth comment to this piece, but I simply can't... the piece is so emotional... and it shook some feelings within me.. Thank you for sharing this piece with us... |
by Karla
Liz |
by Ole Carsten
Hi Lioness |