HOLY S**T I HAV'NT seen a poem this good in years oh mannnnn i f**ken love it
the flow was unbelievable and rhyming the best you are my hero ;lol seriouisly this was so good i read it 3 times so far ok i hate to do this but thereis onwe line that i hate < you made me un funny and than you said funny again i would try to put something dif. its force fix and this poem is up for explicit poem of the week and it will be a winner

Hi CY Gindle,

Thank you very much for your compliments and support. :-)

I will take that on board, I just felt it made a sense, as alcohol does generally make unfunny things seems funny... but I understand the angle you are coming from.

I will have a little think..

Very well written i enjoyed reading it. Hope all is well with you. Take care and keep writing and ill keep reading. :) 5/5