Exellent poetry here! it made me think about alot of things in my past that have happened. it shows great sorrow and grief but those shouldnt take their lives no matter how hard things may seem. yea i know it seems like the world is crashing down and will never get up again but it does eventually. people will get hurt people will cry but its not worth the price of a precious life. live life to the fullest do not let it bring you down be the bigger person and even if you have to fake it put a smile on ur face and pretend till it gets better. it will i promise if not you may dissregaurd me but im here to talk if needed. great poem i giveit 5/5