For you and I

Very beautiful and sweet!!!

One of the prettiest and best rhyming poems I've read in some time- This elegant piece is filled with romance, enchanting nature tones and fun, exciting words that dance within each line. Such a flow and rhythm, like a song. I love your word usage as well.
"of smiles dripping with blueberry"
^^^^ love this line!
I can picture two lovers sitting at the piano, with their hearts filled with love, singing along with each other, all goggle-eyed with warm smiles.
I find this really captivating and think it's wonderful how the author got inspired by the beautiful paper piano that she created. What a precious and sweet poem. Well done Lonely Rider

Congrats on the win Raj :)

One of the prettiest and best rhyming poems I've read in some time- This elegant piece is filled with romance, enchanting nature tones and fun, exciting words that dance within each line. Such a flow and rhythm, like a song. I love your word usage as well.

"of smiles dripping with blueberry"
^^^^ love this line!

I can picture two lovers sitting at the piano, with their hearts filled with love, singing along with each other, all goggle-eyed with warm smiles.

I find this really captivating and think it's wonderful how the author got inspired by the beautiful paper piano that she created. What a precious and sweet poem. Well done Lonely Rider (4)

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Thoughts not so random, as they blend into a reverie of nature from the eyes of one whose love opens wonders for others to see and appreciate. The poem takes the reader on a journey down from the sky, to broad views and then to the focus of a single person, reveling in the simple joy of blueberries on a warm afternoon. Finally, the journey continues inward to the comfort of loving memories shared with a confidante. (10)

Let me sing you a song dear,
of moors wide and skies clear,
of love that reside in amber rays,
^^^^^
should be resides

wild blossom and butterfly plays,
^^^
I think it should be butterflies play?

of struggling spiders in silver web,
footprints on the receding ebb,
of smiles dripping with blueberry,
kohl eyed deer and rabbits fuzzy,
of heart thumping with crazy dreams
silent nights and crystal stream,^
^^^
This one I'll leave up to you. I think streams would sound better because you have both moor and sky in plural further up and you also use nights in this line...also plural?

the music my dear would echo still,
in your heart remember, if you will.

Just some very minor errors that caught my eye. The poem itself is very beautiful and you have created some wonderful imagery throughtout the whole verse.

Loved the poem and loved your little piano too...it's so cute!!!

Congrats on your win....very worthy of the front page.