by The Poet Behind The Poems Feb 28, 2012
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
In a room of pure darkness i pick up my pen , |
When I seen the title, I was like eh... I dunno if I want to read this, but I opened it... and I'm blown away. This is so original, like others said... and it's just amazing. So heartbreaking, though. I can feel the emotion and can imagine sitting there writing a note on a birthday card to someone who can never read it, but it's something you need to do each year just to cope. Ahh, adding this to my favorites! |
by Maple Tree
My heart feels heavy... such a heartbreaking piece... well written and the flow was wonderful.... For me, I feel honoring birthdays is a spiritual blessing... whether they are here among us or smiling within the stars.... I really adore this poem.... |
by BlueJay
Wow, this piece is, wow. I love the way you show that the person is gone, but don't say how or why. I love the way the emotion is shown so clearly and is very strong, and emanates out to the readers so that they feel some pain too, in a way... if that even makes sense in the way I mean it, but can't explain it. The style is very well chosen. The message is so great, and this piece is absolutely stunning. The final stanza would have to be my favorite, and I am very glad I got to read such a great poem. |
This poem touched me. |
by Meme
I agree with Abed, so original. Who would ever think of sad birthdays? I just got a different prespective from this poem. |