Awww this is so heart-breaking and sweet, you saying that you write cards everytime she was taken away from you it's really sweet, very good poem as usual :)

It's the first time I read something about sad birthdays. So it's quite original, and I like how you started.. with such a dark setting.

nice read, Tony :)

I agree with Abed, so original. Who would ever think of sad birthdays? I just got a different prespective from this poem.

The sadness echos with every word, I honestly could taste the bitterness of the sad emotions all through.

Fantastic job.

This poem touched me.

I can see you there crying writing a birthday card that once again will go unread. I love thisz such a sad sweet poem. Shows how much they mean to you and how they never got a chance

Amazing
5/5

Wow, this piece is, wow. I love the way you show that the person is gone, but don't say how or why. I love the way the emotion is shown so clearly and is very strong, and emanates out to the readers so that they feel some pain too, in a way... if that even makes sense in the way I mean it, but can't explain it. The style is very well chosen. The message is so great, and this piece is absolutely stunning. The final stanza would have to be my favorite, and I am very glad I got to read such a great poem.

5/5

~MRK

My heart feels heavy... such a heartbreaking piece... well written and the flow was wonderful.... For me, I feel honoring birthdays is a spiritual blessing... whether they are here among us or smiling within the stars.... I really adore this poem....

When I seen the title, I was like eh... I dunno if I want to read this, but I opened it... and I'm blown away. This is so original, like others said... and it's just amazing. So heartbreaking, though. I can feel the emotion and can imagine sitting there writing a note on a birthday card to someone who can never read it, but it's something you need to do each year just to cope. Ahh, adding this to my favorites!