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I am a little late so I think all has been said that applies to this awesome poem. Interesting filled with images that reach the minds eye. Great flow good job :)

Wishing on a star.
The beauty around us we fail to see in the day, is evident at night,

a very thought provoking ending, as you know, I love questions in poems...

Beautiful piece of poetry Liz, as always
xxx

Liz, I just saw this, I missed such a beautiful piece which incorporates childhood memories, fatherly lessons and constellations part.

I love how you opened this. I was totally sucked in.
And the question in the end, it's so provoking.
I'm mesmerized with this a lot..

This poem reminded me of when I used to sleep at my grandma's house. We would sit in the second floor and there was a bed outside of the rooms. Where we could just lay there and watch the sky. My grandpa would tell us stories about the sky and sometimes about witches. So many good memories. Great poem.

Beautiful...I used to lie down in the garden when I was a child and contemplate the constellations. Loved it Liz.