Beautifully written! The emotion of love is so sweet. Was a very beautiful poem! 5/5

The emotions are lovely here. A beautiful love poem. It makes me think of how people feel when they are in love! It makes me think of my hubby

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Sometimes this can make all the difference. I hope you get all of these things or even just one!
Lostlove

Awww... I really like this. I wish that I can have the courage to go up to my crush and said all these that you have written. Nice poem!

I love the train of emotion in your piece. It reminds me of one of my poems title "I'm satisfied". That's the one and only comical poem I've ever written.

Keep writing.

Aww wouldnt that be amazing?:) its the smallest things that make us girls smile. good job:)

Just a few words to make your day it doesnt seem so difficult! Another cute little poem tha brought a smile to my face. You've allowed the poem to express love in its simplest form, back to the bare bones behind the emotion. Beautifully penned. (:

SO cute!

Just one word
and your talent
shines bright

Really good piece theres alot of truth in this piece

Awww, this is so sweet. :)
awesome job

Just one I need you,
A "You're the love of my life",
It's all I need.

- the ending tied it all for me :]

It's interesting to go back to the old poems and read them then see the progress. This poem is straightforward and to the point, I like it.