Bratilda Brattington

by HOLLY ARMER   Feb 29, 2012


Bratilda Brattington
has bristly braids that bend
but breaking the broomstick
beneath her broad britches
brings a behemoth amount
of belly bumping laughter

*Club challenge prompt: Alliteration poem about broom sticks.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    Holly*

    My comments for the challenges are supposed to be long and well thought out, but this is one I could NOT pass up and crack up every single time I read it, haahhaah. The alliteration is obviously perfect, but the poem is so damn funny, I can't get over it! Can I just say, I LOVE that you used behemoth in this poem? Bahahahaha.... this is so so so SO funny!

  • 12 years ago

    by Schrodingers cat

    Woooww

  • 12 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Holly you have done an amazing job with the alliteration in this funny poem. You pulled it off well. Love it!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Hahahah! Holly this was hilarious!! I think u did amazing with that challenge!! Alliteration is something I've never attempted, I don't have the patience to repeat the same letter words! Lol

    Loved this! Super creative!

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