by Karla Feb 29, 2012
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
"When I stand before thee at the day's end, thou shalt see my scars and know that I had my wounds and also my healing." |
A poem that is very deserving for its craftsmanship, a talented write from a master of emotion projections, in her poetry. Using the inspiration from a quote from a famous poet (R. Tagore), and blending it in with a flavor of Greek mythology was very creative, indeed. The Poetess craftily uses the Chiron's wounds from the poisoned arrow myth, and her imagination to inspire a new beginning for 2 damaged souls in here. A compassionate individual that is portrayed here as the person that has been hurt (just like the Chiron), from the losses (wounds) inflicted perhaps from a previous relationship. She then goes on to portray a empyrean love that she perceives exists in the subliminal conscience of the characters, each carrying wounds from their individual pasts, to suggest that this like-minded union, can heal the fatal wounds for both. The flow and the symbolism conveyed in this hard hitting poem were par excellence. The ending was superb, injected with hope, from the story of the mythological Centaur, Chiron: |
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by Decayed
Your pieces always ripple the waters of my inspiration within. I can find humanity in them. Awesome piece, awesome piece. |
by Muran
Great work, snatched a piece of heart with it. |
by Chelsey
I love this poem Karla. You took a quote , and because of ur inspiration from it, you came out wih a maserpiece. Thank you for the background information. After I read that I reread this poem and it was even more amazing! |