Paper, Rock, Scissor

by HiddenScars   Feb 29, 2012


Paper. rock, scissor
I pick scissor
One reason three words
Because of you
Because of what you've put me through
This is relieving my inner pain
It may leave scars, but it shows how many times you've put me through hell
One for each day, too many to count anymore
For months you've treated me like dirt
But you don't even care
You give me apologies, but they're all lies
Maybe you would make a great actor someday
But thats something committed you have to try
Obviously relationships aren't your thing
Cause look what you've done to me

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  • 11 years ago

    by awww

    The title is what made me check this poem out. I see the thought behind the poem and I like it. Try working on the content. I found one of your lines too long. You could split it into two lines but keeping the same thought.
    Example:
    "it may leave scars but it shows something more.
    it shows how many times you've put me through hell"

    Something like that. Entirely up to you. I really like the idea of this piece and I'm sure you can improve it. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    Try to heal the scars and don't hurt yourself.

  • 12 years ago

    by princess

    Nice title!

  • 12 years ago

    by princess

    Nice title!

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