Please stay or i'll fade
by CryingHeart Mar 1, 2012
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Innocent smiles, Beautiful lies , written on sand , with the passage of time drift away, into a land unknown unseen , left to die in isolation has it been, since the day you left i forgot to live forgot to breathe but baby your the only reason to try, dont go i'll fade please stay |
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12 years ago
by Paul Gondwe
I would suggest you out it into stanzas so that it flows even better. I really like the content of this piece, the message you are trying to send out is also amazing, well written.
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12 years ago
by victor dyck
Very touching I haveoftenlatelyfelt the same sadness
Over girls I void have married especcialllly the sea -
12 years ago
by DarkLight
Mmmh..am luvin this .....baby please dnt go......give me her cell phone no. n am sure enough she will stay.hahaha
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12 years ago
Heart touching !
Short but holds impact...impressive.
Appreciated !
