Heart touching !
Short but holds impact...impressive.
Appreciated !

Mmmh..am luvin this .....baby please dnt go......give me her cell phone no. n am sure enough she will stay.hahaha

jst kiddin.

Very touching I haveoftenlatelyfelt the same sadness
Over girls I void have married especcialllly the sea

I would suggest you out it into stanzas so that it flows even better. I really like the content of this piece, the message you are trying to send out is also amazing, well written.