Winter wonderland ( collab with Liliana)

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Mar 1, 2012


As white snow falls from the sky...
The floor beneath me changes
With each flake.

And this ground I walk through
Shows me how the beauty of
Winter can illuminate my death
Cold heart.

I find myself staring at this
enchanting new world infatuated
by clear crystals on naked trees
Glowing in the moonlight.

mother natures children covered
in the glittering frost as all colours
are banished from sight releasing the
invasion of this winter wonderland.

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A collab with liliana please coment and rate hers
aswell please http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=1190721
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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    This is a fantastic collaboration. You two both worked together and made a beautiful piece!

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this poem. I love the images.

    I love how you mention that the beauty of the snow can illuminate a cold heart. Something cold can bring warmth to something else cold.

    Beautiful

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I can't believe I didnt' comment on this since I read it a few times..
    So here goes, loved it , smooth easy flow between too good poets. Well done you two

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Lily & Tony
    The names synchronize, and so does this piece. I love how green it feels... how fluffy and melodious.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This is beautiful, it's flow is really smooth and you balance each other well.
    A really nice poem, great imagery and wording
    xxx

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