Excellent collab. Beautiful imagery.

5/5

Very good sensory words to portray winter -the beauty of nature and how it can warm a ..' Cold heart' and make us stop and appreciate the beauty . Wonderful poem Tony :)

Wow this was a great collaboration. I like how you described the beauty of winter, but there was also a darkness to it... It was an interesting twist that intrigued me.

Well done to both of you!

Like I told you before, y'all rock together :).
2 of my favorite writers!<3

I love love this :).
You can see this in your head beautifully.

I love the line of how the winter illuminated your cold heart. You can't tell who wrote what; it flows together flawlessly.

Def a fav!
5/5

Wow u too did a great jb:)
I love this poem:)

I'm not usually one who will read or write about nature, however I'm glad I decided to try it, because this piece is a fabulous collaboration. You really can't tell who wrote what, or any difference in style, so it is seamless, which is tough to do, but excellent when well done as exhibited here. The imagery and descriptions are fantastic and have done their job quite well. It is a very unique piece and it is deffinatly going on my favorites list.

5/5

~MRK

This is beautiful, it's flow is really smooth and you balance each other well.
A really nice poem, great imagery and wording
xxx

Lily & Tony
The names synchronize, and so does this piece. I love how green it feels... how fluffy and melodious.

I can't believe I didnt' comment on this since I read it a few times..
So here goes, loved it , smooth easy flow between too good poets. Well done you two

I love this poem. I love the images.

I love how you mention that the beauty of the snow can illuminate a cold heart. Something cold can bring warmth to something else cold.

Beautiful

x

This is a fantastic collaboration. You two both worked together and made a beautiful piece!