This is such an excellent short cute poem

Love is unchanging, beautiful, and fun
And when we leave this world
loving's never done,
love is everlasting, patient and kind
love will never stop or ever leave our mind.
Love is in spring, summer, and fall
And when its said and done love is forever all

^^
How you wrote it was just amazging
Love your work(:

5/5 from me(:

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Idk whats better
what you show me at school or what you've posted either way its really good. and you say you're not a poet :P haha :)

IT"S FANTASTIC!!! I loved it.

Thnx yall n thnx lil sis

Ya just cause your taller but am still older haha :)

This is good. well written with good choice of words, a nice flow and some rhyming that keep the readers captivated.