by Tara Kay
:O |
You know,they were many reasons why I came back..and I was so pissed... |
by silvershoes
Hey Yaki, I love your interpretation and breakdown of my poem. I'll do my best to tell you what it's really about ;) |
WHAT. |
by Sunshine
Edit |
,,,YES! |
by Hellon
It snows down lonely mountain. |
by Sunshine
Amazing poem of despondency seamlessly described. The poet has reached her limit, can move neither up the mountain nor back. Above her lay the challenges of life, behind her the experiences thus far, and within her the accumulated disappointments that weigh her down. It might be a snowball that has rolled down the heights, gathering mass until it has, for her, become an unyielding force. It appears to bring her to the brink of absolute despair, yet the fact she is able to articulate the feeling indicates that she has the capacity to place that first step on the upward slope and, like Sisyphus, carry on through the absurdity. |
It seems to me the Poetess is now getting in competition with our Ms. Sunshine, who writes some of the deepest and saddest poems. So, I could not resist picking this as one of my winners this week. The emotions laid down in each stanza are deeply touching: |
by C P West
Each line leads you intensely to the next with a great close. Very nice. |
by C P West
Each line leads you intensely to the next with a great close. Very nice. |
This was so beautiful. It really had me anticipating each line to come. Great job :) |
by Nema
I Thank you for using such a title :) it conveys an image of a symbol of the utmost strength and power. |
by Meena Krish
The title is just a title and the write paints something more, something deeper where sadness just reaches into the depths of a heart. |
by Sunshine
That moment when you are walking back home, long way, and you remember a sad poem you once read, written by someone you don't really really know, but still know-in a way or another. |
by Naughtymouse
Along time ago Nana and I were talking about our favourite writes on PnQ and she named this one and one of her all time favourites, after I read it it was easy to see why and so I added it to my own favourites. I've read this piece so many times now i could probably recite it lol |
The "lonely mountain" you use here reminds me so much of Lord of the Rings, but your play on the word lonely drags the reader so much deeper. |