Will have to crown you the Queen of Shape Poetry. I wish this site would allow the shapes without all the dots to hold that shape, it is very distracting and interferes with the flow of the poem as it is read.

I feel so lame. I have tried to do shape poetry and it never looks like anything but a mess.
I agree queen of shape poetry..Loved the shape, the flow and the theme
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Hey this Iz Awesome !
Really like the manner u arranged."Moon shaped" well,making such sequential patterns requires efforts !
Nicely made.

Awesome shape poem ! Well done ! :)

I am lost for words on what to say about this great piece. I have never seen this form before but you have mastered it well.

Ohh my, Raj this indeed for me a mesmerizing piece and I have to hand it to you for you are indeed the queen of shape poetry.

As for the write itself, it holds so much desire, a yearning that thirsts for a closure and it makes the reader to sigh with those feelings..excellent work!

Holy Cow...that's a moon o.O

Simply beautiful.

all the best and take care

Woh, this is amazing Raj! :) Love your shape poetry, you always do it so well!

Mesmerising :D
~ Olwin

WOOOOOwww...I love shaped poems! Oh my...where have I been? Glad to have come across your page! I'm sorry but I will have to read more from you! Added this to faves as I am awestruck by its beauty.

Creative and nicely put.