If Only You Knew

by Shadow   Mar 2, 2012


If only you knew
How you make me feel
If only you knew
I hate me too
I see what I do
I see how it makes you feel

Im not proud
Not even for an hour
This darkness devouring my soul
Filling my heart wih ice and coal
This battle of never ending war
How long will this last?
Before dark consums my last chance

Im like sand under your feet
dirty and walked over
Why dont I move?
because I know its what I diserve
It wont be long before you realize this too
and lock me out the door
leaving me out all alone.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    Sounds like theres a bit of confusion in this and also a very sorrowful piece of poetry you have written - i beieve that in love, no one should hate themselves , but i totaly get what you mean, i've kinda been through a similar situaion. . . . but nonetheless its a good piece..keep on writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Alanis

    Ur emotions r strong like the feeling of sympathy u give the reader :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Domino0792

    So honest, I can relate. I enjoyed the read. Thanks!