WOW! I don't even know where to begin. This is very heartfelt and full of sadness, but you can feel the hope you still feel. Very well done. I love this one. :-)

Thats amazings! Full of feeling. I love it. I totally know what your talking about. Great job. 100/100 =)
-Shadow

I have seen you join this site and i must say..you have grown remarkably as a writer..hope you keep it up coz you are on the right path..

i loved this piece, your choice of words, your rhyimng scheme, just so beautiful.

I have seen you join this site and i must say..you have grown remarkably as a writer..hope you keep it up coz you are on the right path..

i loved this piece, your choice of words, your rhyimng scheme, just so beautiful.

I have seen you join this site and i must say..you have grown remarkably as a writer..hope you keep it up coz you are on the right path..

i loved this piece, your choice of words, your rhyimng scheme, just so beautiful.

You have a feuture as a poet. expand your vocabulary and everything will come together.

The worst to imagine is Past.. After the rain, the sun will shine.. Stay strong..

Beautiful

I love it this actually reminds me of my best-friend...

but dear don't think about what pain it brought you because the things that happened in the past always make you stronger yiu just have to overcome it... =)