by Faith Ann
Anyone who treats you less then amazing doesnt deserve your love. Ive learned that the hard way. |
Wow, I really felt my heart break as if it was yours as you expereinces this destress, except for the last thing it reminds me of a guy I know at school, maybe I'll show it to him, wonderful job, you are talented |
Wow, I can see lots of pain and anger |
Very relatable! I liked your rhetorical questioning, in line 9. I think you have a good start. But I challenge you to revise this. Make it more.... Obscure. Don't say everything you want to say so plainly. You can hint at what you mean without actually stating it. You can use derogatory words, and convey the same meaning. You can say the same thing, it'll just feel stronger. I hope you take my thoughts into consideration. |
by Midnight Sky
Whoever said those things to you should die because nobody should say that |