Comments : Stranger at a funeral

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    The images you expressed are just so vivid !
    just I was wondering what did you mean by "Listing to songs out crying loss" is it Listening * of I just didn't get it ?

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Listening to a voice, listening to a tone even not knowing the words, the tone reveals the mood of sadness

  • 12 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Wauh a poem about sadness,mike it

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks I was there to support my love. It was a family member died of cancer, after years of illness.
    But I tried to capture te essence of standing there not knowing what will happend, and you really don't ask or chat during a funural
    Thanks for you kind comment

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Very, Very heartbreaking poem.

    This has reminded me of the funerals I have been to and when I have lost someone.

    Broke my heart. Well done

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Lioness
    I wrote it be cores. I could not get rid of the mood, after the funural.
    I used a poem to help me to clear my mind

    kindly
    Ole