Wow beautiful imagery.

"Here lies the dilapidated body of a phoenix
With its fiery blood flowing like lava"
Awesome start. Really shows defeat and hopelessness..

"Its eyes of amber set in anger"
But even if it lies defeated, it still has the 'fire' in it. Perhaps powered by vengeance or hate or maybe pain..

"Screeching out for beautiful metamorphosis
That will come with pending resurrection"
Great ending to a great piece.

I think there is a 'phoenix' in all of us. When we fall apart, there is a 'fire' in us empowered by our reason. And soon we'll get back up.. again.

Great job. Love the title. A phoenix's deterioration includes getting back up again. Enjoyed reading this. Definitely a 5/5 :) Keep writing!

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