Comments : Birth of Spring

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Wow this poem is great:)
    I trully liked how u ended it:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ending Credits

    I've exhausted my anguish
    locked It away within a snowflake

    Lovely symbolism! I don't even know how you come up with the the phrases you do but they always grip the readers heart. I got goosebumps when I read this little piece. It's so wonderful. My understanding of it, is letting the worries of yesterday go to try and look onward for a brighter future. It gives hope and shows inner-peace. Flows well, shows heart. I like this! :)

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Absolutely beautiful