Yaki dear, you weave such beautiful words with such strong emotions into poems. I only have one critique....I believe halve should be half.
beautiful poem as always and it is so lovely to see such power punching words with deep reflections of wisdom.

Use "half" instead of halve in the first line.

halve refers to for example slicing an apple into two parts

halve refers to the motion of deriving something into two portions

while half means one of two parts that consititutes a whole

hope this helps