Very sad indeed. A sweet dream that hopefully comes true
Well written with very intense emotion
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My darling, it's your in my dreams.
change your
to you

:(

It's a sad piece. I do hope that you are bless with a baby. I also hope I can have one some day. They are adorable, lovely, and many more adjectives. I feel babies are the only reason worth for living life because in my opinion the only reason why someone would want a child is when they are in love. And so the baby is the fruit of their love. Amazing piece Liz.

Liz- I think today is teary eye'd tissue day... this formed piece is heart gripping.... just a lovely sad piece... your heart sings within this poem...really made me teary... well done~

I started reading the poem and I was like thats soooo sweet:)
Then in the end Awwwww thats sad:(
I do hope too that u'll have a baby:)
Great poem

Beautiful and sad .......

Very sad but a beautiful write it had a great flow to it you could almost sing it

fantastic job

Sad :/ but but really unique, great job 5/5

I'd be lying if I said.. I feel your pain.

But you don't know that with this write you have crumpled my heart... I was touched from head to toe. First, the title... and then, the beautiful bright scenery in the beginning, and the complete melancholy in the end.

You really deserve the best in life, Liz.
You are a true woman, I wish you fill the world with happy people...

~ love.

Defnitly is a sad poem, though it did start out really lovely and nice but then it really deepened in the end, really did have an impact because you painted a nice picture at the beginning of something you dream of. . I can already see that you love this unborn baby, I too hope your blessed with one :)

Liz, This is such a lovely piece but there is that hint of sadness, lost hope, and longing, You penned a really heartfelt piece,

love always
xxx

Very sad :( yet the poem was beautifully worded. You kept the poem simple but the effect it had on me the reader was massive.

5/5