Your style of writing just captivates me..how you manage to make the sentences work and just flow so smoothly, i cant describe. And its evident in this piece that you really know what you are doing when you write.

I like how you start this piece with accepting that you know you want his affection. You continue to express emotions throughout the piece and how you end it is remarkable. Nominated

Liz

awesome write,
It's a love poem. This time I checked the category.
it's really good and sad too. I dont know what to write because the poem is self explain. I like how you write. Everything ties up or down. It makes perfect sense.

Beautiful, I really love the emotions you have poured into this write.. so organic and comforting.

Liz, I read this one on my break at work and didn't have time to comment,
but I must say I loved this piece, such beauty and amazing words, expressions and emotion was inticing and sensual yet romantic and nude.

The feeling washes
above me like a sun
shower which
always manages
to keep me warm.
^^WOW!! The expression "sun shower" blew me away, lovely image and great metaphors for love

Great piece as always,
I love the change in genre, you write beautifully

love
xxx

Good poem, I must admit I like how you brought this piece together. Sensual, tender, and sweet all in one.

Great poem

Liz,
Another smashing poem by you. So beautiful and completely faultless.

Excellent

5/5

Oh Liz-

Mercy... such a beautiful love poem....

"The feeling washes
above me like a sun
shower which
always manages
to keep me warm."

^^^ what an elegant, soft, and touching stanza....

a touch of sadness.... however elegantly written.... beautiful piece~

Good work

The feeling washes
above me like a sun
shower which
always manages
to keep me warm

This one is very nice

Nomination :0)