Comments : Innocence

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Innocence not innocents. I think you mean

  • 12 years ago

    by Aaron

    Nope she didn't!!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by JustAnotherPoet

    Nice poem but I don't understand the first line.

    I long for the days once missed the days of young innocence.

    Other than that, it is quite good.

    • 10 years ago

      by Ashley

      Meaning as you get older everything is different you are not as innocence as you once were and that never comes back. With what i said it is to do with being unaware of what is really going on in the adult world and a mother and father fighting, then when u are older you see and understand all

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashley

    Thank you for letting me know i shall fix it up thank you